Genoa City Athletic Club
Lauren and Nick are looking at menus. A waiter comes over
and lights the two tall white candles that sits on the table.
Waiter: Are we ready to order?
Lauren: I’ll start with a white wine.
Nick: Whatever you have on tap and I prefer it in a glass.
Waiter: Be right back.
Lauren and Nick are looking over their menus. Lauren puts her down and takes a deep exhale unable to concentrate on all the words
looking at her. Mary and Sheila Carter are on her mind.
Nick looks at Lauren and can tell something is wrong.
Nick: You sounded upset when you called for drinks. You
ready to talk about it?
Lauren: It’s that damn Mary Carter or Vandalynn more like
vandalism if you ask me. We went to confront her about her identity and about
this child she is carrying. Nick this is eating away at me. Even from the grave
Sheila is still tormenting me, now through her spawn.
Nick: When you confronted her what did she have to say for
herself?
Lauren: That’s just it, we don’t know where little Miss Mary
Carter is. Having one Carter in town is bad enough but now we not only got Daisy,
we have Mary too. Daisy took joy in
admitting that Vandalism was actually her younger sister Mary. I could have
wiped that smug look off her face. Not only did Vandalism trick my son into a
romance, now she’s having his child. I’m telling you Nick I am not going to let
this happen. There is no way in hell I will allow a Carter be born into my
family. Look at what Daisy did to Daniel. She raped him!
Nick: I know. But you must be rational about this. Have you
thought about the fact maybe Scotty loves Vandalynn or Mary?
Lauren: He’s blinded by her. Nick, I don’t care what I must
do, Mary will not give birth to my grandchild.
Nick: Lauren what can you do? What are you going to do?
Created by William J Bell and Lee Phillip Bell
Episode 201: Mary Carter meets Genoa City!
Written by ML Cooks
Creative Consults: Cary Richardson with Alex Washington
Midtown Genoa City, Hungry Hearts
Inside the men’s restroom. Ryder has just raped Scotty.
Ryder looks at Scotty as he lays on the ground with blood leaking from his head
from the head bashing Ryder handed out. Ryder then looks upon blood slowly
streaming from the rectum area of Scotty’s pants.
Ryder smiles, proud of his crime, taking pleasure in seeing
his victim bleed in a sick and twisted way.
He then looks in the mirror and notices half his face make
up has run down his face from the sweat brought upon by the rape itself.
Ryder: I bet after this you will never think about another
man again you fukking fruit cake. You will be a father to my nephew. A straight
father. No fruits allowed.
Ryder then unlocks the door behind him and rushes out the
club. He bumps into a few people unable to see since some of his face make up
is running and now burning his eyes causing them to water up.
Phillip hears the commotion and looks Ryder’s way. He sees
Ryder with the half-painted face. Ryder is finally able to make it out the
club. Phillip then looks over at the bathroom. Phillips gut tells him something
is not right as he noticed the painted faced man enter the bathroom right after
Scotty and some time has passed, and the man emerges vastly different from when
Phillip first seen him.
Rufus aka Miss Rue puts her hand on Phillips chin and moves
pulls his face back in her direction.
Phillip looks at Miss Rue and sees the cocaine powder around
her nose.
Phillip: You need to visit the ladies room and fix yourself.
I gotta check something out.
Phillip gets up from his booth and walks over to the men’s
restroom. He opens the door and is absolutely stunned seeing Scotty laid out on
the ground with blood surrounding him.
Phillip: Scotty what happened?
He rushes over to him and kneels down next to him. He lifts
his upper body and shakes him a little trying to get Scotty to come too.
Phillip: Wake up Scotty!
Phillip pulls out his cell phone and dials 911.
Miss Rue then stumbles in on the scene wondering where Phillip
has been. She covers her mouth as she gasps looking at a limped Scotty.
Miss Rue: What happened? I didn’t like the kid but damn.
Verdon Lou Rd, Ryders squatter House
Ryder climbs through the make shift door in the rear of the
house, aka the big hole in the wall. He is breathing deeply and then he gets a
call on his cell.
Ryder (out of breath): What do you want?
Caller: I need an update on the situation.
Ryder: Why? I’m in control here I am and I told you not to
call me! Ill contact you for an update on your situation. You know what you
have to do now do it or I’ll come over there and cut your knee caps off your
body!
Caller: Don’t you threaten me! You kids will not do me like
this! I want answers.
Ryder: Everything is fine. Everything is going according to
plan. Just as mother wanted it to.
Voice: The target has no idea who I really am or what I’m up
to. I have a plan to keep it that way.
Ryder: Then good. Don’t call me again. I’ll contact you.
Soon everything will come together. Just play your part.
Ryder hangs up the phone. Then he gets a punch in the face
and almost loses his balance. He looks over and sees a fuming Mary.
Ryder: Why the hell did you do that!
Mary: I found your little meth lab! Are you a devil
worshiper or what? Is that part of Sheila’s plan.
Ryder gives Mary an angry look and in a rage but from hitting his own sister he punches a
hole through the wall.
Ryder: I told you to stay out my room!
Mary: Well it’s a good thing I didn’t. I am having Scotty’s
child and you have me around all these harmful chemicals.
Ryder: You fukking whore! It’s not Scotty’s baby! You whored
your hole out to Daniel and Noah too.
Mary: Don’t talk to me like that! I am not a whore. This was
not my idea to sleep with three men and sees who’s lucky enough to father my
child.
Ryder: But you didn’t stop did you? I just did you a fukking
favor and this is how you pay me back.
Mary: A favor? What are you talking about? What happened to
your scary Halloween make up?
Ryder: You rotten whore!
Ryder grabs Mary’s neck and chokes slams her into the wall.
He holds her in the choke hold she is in.
Ryder: I told you not to go in my room. You violated my
privacy and I don’t like that. I saved your ass enough now it’s’ time for you
to do what you need to do. Go face Lauren and tell her who you really are. It’s
time to move this plot ahead.
Ryder let’s go of Mary. She is shaking with tears in her
eyes.
She grabs her purse and rushes out the hole in the wall to
leave Ryder alone with his devilish things and ideals along with his drugs. As
Mary walks up the street she can here Ryder let out an eerie scream. She then picks up the pace wiping tears from her eyes.
Mary: I must stay away from him. Ryder is ill.
Scotty is rushed into the ER as Phillip is not far behind.
Paul arrives on the scene as well and approaches Phillip.
Paul: Phillip I got a call something about Scotty? What in
the hell happened?
Phillip: Paul I don’t know I found him on the floor in the
bathroom. He had blood coming from his head.
Paul: In the bathroom of where?
Nina and Chance then arrives on the scene and approaches
Phillip. She rushes past Paul and gives Phillip a hug.
Chance: Dad what’s going on?
Paul: It’s about Scotty and I’m trying to get to the bottom
of it.
Miss Rue then enters the ER and sees Phillip walking with
Paul and his family. She stands back and watches them but keeps a low profile.
Paul: Phillip found Scotty on the floor of a bath room and
he was just about to tell me where that was.
Phillip begins to sweat profusely as he realizes he found
Scotty in a gay bar bathroom. He doesn’t know how everyone will handle his news
and stubbles on his words.
Nina: Slow down Paul. Phillip has been through enough from
being shot and drugged with cocaine thanks to Cane. Let Phillip have a seat and
calm down a bit. This is obviously very upsetting to him. Chance go get your father some water.
Nina walks Phillip over to the seating area and they sit directly
across from Miss Rue. Miss Rue picks up a magazine and pretends to read it and
at the same time using it as a shield.
Lauren rushes into the ER with Nick right behind her.
Lauren sees Paul and rushes over to him.
Lauren: Paul you called what happened to my son is he ok?
Paul: Lauren Scotty has been brought in with injuries. I am
not sure what happened yet but Phillip is about to tell us.
Lauren has a look of confusion on her face.
Lauren: Phillip Chancellor?
Paul: Yes.
Lauren: That’s odd.
Lauren walks past Nina and stands in front of Phillip.
Lauren walks past Nina and stands in front of Phillip.
Lauren: What the happened to my son Phillip? You found him
where?
Nina: On the bathroom floor.
Lauren: This doesn’t make any sense. The bathroom floor of
where and how did you of all people find him?
The Doctor, Dr. Ellsworth then enters the seating area where
everyone is.
Dr: Lauren Baldwin?
Lauren: Yes Dr. what is it?
Dr: There is a woman here who is adamant she sees Scotty.
She says she’s Scotty wife and she has a right to see him. Something seems off
so I wanted to make sure it was ok with you. I need consent forms signed for
surgery as well.
Lauren: Surgery oh my GOD! My Scotty what happened to him
Doctor?
Dr: We are unsure at the moment.
Lauren: Well who this woman?
Mary Carter then walks around the Corner to finally face
Lauren.
Laurens mouth drops in shock as a look of horror crosses her
face. Nick walks up behind Lauren and comforts her knowing this is making
Lauren even more upset.
Mary has an angelic smile on her face and then gives a
little wave at Lauren, who looks simply horrified.









That cliffhanger is everything. Mary made an ENTRANCE.
ReplyDeleteThose Ryder scenes are very dark, still. I do get where you're going with it, though. Hopefully this plays out well.
Mary is delicious right now, and I love the mystery of who Ryder is calling. Is it Sheila?
There's a nice tenderness in the hospital scenes. You really played those scenes well. The tension was palpable. Nice work stalling on Philip having to out Scotty to his family.
Again, great work on the cliffhanger. I'm excited to see what Mary will pull next, and the Carter family drama that ensues. They all seem to want different things and that can only lead down a dark road for all of them.
Good work!
Ryder is one sick puppy. Wearing masks, choking his sister, and who is he talking to on the phone? We will find out soon…
ReplyDeleteNick and Lauren’s dinner set up the end beautifully. Lauren tense about Sheila and giving Nick a bit of a history lesson what Lauren has gone through with Sheila, and now Sheila’s children are still haunting her. I wonder if Lauren is going to go crazy from all the stress that this is causing her, and now Lauren has met Mary. I wonder what shes going to do when she finds out what Ryder did to her son (I have a couple of ideas lol)
I also wonder if this is the beginning of Philip and Scotty. You know I’m rooting for them, but will Miss Rue be trouble for that possible union?
These last two episodes had a tense build to them. That’s good writing when you can evoke emotions from your readers. Keep it up..