GC Memorial
Lauren is on her knees in the hall way outside of Mary
Carter’s room.
She’s crying and is very hysterical.
Lauren: No! Not my Scotty! After all these years Sheila has
managed to get her clutches in you again. Oh my god!
Lauren has a flash back of one of her many confrontations with Sheila.
Lauren: She’s a monster!
Scotty shakes his head in disbelief.
Scotty: How could this be happening? Vandalynn lied to me.
She set me up.
Daisy looks down at Lauren with a smile.
Daisy: I feel much better now. It feels so good
knowing I’ve ruined your day and the rest of your life. I wish my mother
was here to witness this. She’d be so proud.
Lauren: Go to hell Bitch!
Daisy: Tootles Lauren, until we meet again.
Daisy walks away from Scotty and Lauren.
Lauren looks up at Scotty, wiping the tears from her eyes.
Scotty helps his mom stand back on her own two feet.
She looks at him.
Lauren: Scotty how could you do this, how could you let this
happen? You are having a child with
Sheila’s Carter daughter. What are we going to do?... This cannot happen… I
won’t let it!
Scotty looks at his mom with so much going through his mind
like the fact he’s going to be a father.
Created by William J Bell and Lee Phillip Bell
Episode 198: Mary Carter is having Scotty’s Baby
Written by ML Cooks
Story Consults: Alex Washington and Cary Richardson
Avery: I heard someone sit down.
Phyllis: It’s me sis. I came to see you off.
Victor then walks into the room.
Phyllis: They say when one of your sense gives out your
others are more active or something like that. Do you sense a dark force in the
room Avery?
Avery: Not really.
Phyllis: Victor is here.
Avery: Victor it’s nice to se- well It’s good that you are
here.
Victor: I don’t want to interrupt sister bonding but-
Phyllis cuts Victor off.
Phyllis: Yes you did otherwise you wouldn’t be here!
Victor looks at Phyllis.
Victor: Upset Phyllis?
Phyllis: Just leave, your turning this into something it
should not be. I’m trying to see my sister off and here you are darkening
things up.
Victor: Have you seen Nick or your good friend Lauren? It
was nice seeing them together the other night at Gina’s. They look good
together.
Phyllis: You bastard!
Avery: I don’t understand what is going here? Nick,…Lauren?
Victor: Phyllis here is upset that Nick and Lauren are
dating.
Phyllis: Ridiculous. I don’t have time for this.
Victor: Anyway, Avery I too came to see you off. You were
always loyal to me and I appreciate that. I thank you for what you did for me
at my trial.
Avery: It hurt many people Victor. What I did for you is not
one of the proudest moments of my career. The stress of it led me to lose
control of myself. I had an affair with Cane and we were snorting coke.
Victor: I’m very sorry about that. If there is anything you
may ever need you can count on me.
Phyllis: Just don’t ask for any money. Victor is broke as a
joke.
Phyllis smiles at Victor knowing she hit him wear it hurts.
Victor nods.
Victor: I’ll tell Nick and Lauren you said hi.
Phyllis: Yea you do that Victor. So nice of you to stop
bye!!
Victor turns around and leaves running into Daisy as he
does.
Daisy: Hello Mr. Newman. Good to see you out of jail.
Victor: You to young Carter.
Victor smiles and leaves.
Chicago Ill, Nursing Home
Nina walks over towards Karynn and Esther who are still
sitting across from Karl’s now empty cold room. Karynn wipes her eyes as she
looks up and sees Nina.
Karynn: I don’t want any pity from you chubby.
Nina: Even through mourning you’re still a sour person.
Nina looks at Esther.
Esther: I can tell something is wrong, what is it Nina?
Nina: Just got bad news from GC.
Esther: Bad news, what could be worse than Katherine’s
brother Karl dying?
Nina: Mac called me.
Esther: Mackenzie?
Karynn: I remember her. She was so nice to me and especially
Karl. Karl was very smitten with her. Mac welcomed us with open arms when we
arrived in GC as you guys call it.
Nina: It’s her father Brock. He’s been killed in an air
plane crash.
Esther screams out and stands up covering her mouth with her
hand as she is in shock.
Karynn: Poor girl. I know how it is to lose a loved one.
First Katherine and now Karl. Brock would have been my nephew.
Esther: All of Mrs. C’s kids are dead. First Tucker now
Brock.
Nina: We need to get back, to be there for her. Oh, and
since Brock has passed on, Mac is the new executor of Katherine’s will and it’s
going to be read as soon as we get back. I guess Chancellor Inc is having
management issues and there are instruction for C.I. in the will.
This excites Karynn and she stands up, as Garret walks over
to her with a beer.
Nina: Is that all you ever think about, other people’s
money?
Karynn: No Nina I was actually thinking of getting you a
gift certificate to weight watchers. They can even eat chips on that diet or so
I heard Oprah say the many times I’ve seen that commercial. How’s that pudgy?
Nina: What a rotten bitch you are! If you are not in my car
in the next ten minutes you’ll be left here. Nina turns around and storms off
with Chance following her.
Karynn looks at Garrett and grabs her beer.
Esther: Miss Shepard, you’re not going to open that right
here and, now are you?
Karynn pulls up on the tab and opens the can. She takes a
swig.
Karynn: This mourning has turned into a celebration Esther.
I’m about to finally get what is owed to me from my sister’s estate.
Karynn
swings the can of beer around and some spills onto the floor.
Karynn looks at Garret.
Karynn: Thank you for everything Garrett. I must be moving on.
Garett: I want some of the estate too.
Karynn: In your dreams.
Karynn turns around grabs Esther and they leave the nursing
home as Garrett stares at them.
Karynn walks right past her daughter Kitten without even
saying good bye.
Kitten puts her paper work down and walks over to Garrett.
Garrett: Your mother is about to come into some big money.
Kitten: Ooo.. I like big money.
Garret: You also like big black-
Kitten: I’m at work Garrett. Everyone doesn’t need to know
my sexual secrets.
Garrett: Sorry darling.
Kitten: I want some money too. I am so tired of wiping ass
and crotches.
Garret: I could use some new clothes. Hell for that matter I
can finally wash my clothes.
Kitten: My mother doesn’t like either one of us how will we
get her to give us a slice of the pie?
Garrett: Good point… I was just gonna harass, beg, plead and
if I have to cry until I get on her nerves so much she’ll be offering me money
to leave town. I know how Kary is. Eventually she’ll cave.
Kitten: Hmm but what about me? We can’t stand each other.
Garrett: Yea after what we did to her. We had an affair and
she walked in on us doing the good nasty.
Kitten: I got it. Karynn left so she hasn’t had time to grab
uncle Karl’s ashes. Leave that to me to make that a great ice breaker for when
I arrive in Genoa City.
Kitten takes her name tag off and throws it on the floor.
She pushes up her bosom’s and begins to leave her job for the last time.
Kitten: Let’s go Gary, it’s time to collect some money. I
can’t do this whole drive by myself.
A nurse has been watching Kitten.
Nurse: You can’t just walk out on your shift like this?
Kitten: Watch me…
Back in GC, Hospital
“I’ll stick to it Phyllis one more time.”
She thinks to herself.
She enters.
Phyllis looks up and is pissed Daisy is there.
Phyllis: This is another time where I need you to use your
other senses Avery.
Avery: I’m sorry Phyllis I don’t know what that means.
Phyllis: The devil is here.
Daisy: Oh just stop being so over the top Phyllis. Your too
told to be acting this way you’re a grandmother, act like one.
Avery: Daisy, It’s good to hear your voice. How has
everything been for you?
Daisy: It would be a lot better if your bitter sister would
get out the way.
Phyllis: How many times do I have to say to you, you will
never be with my son or his daughter?
Daisy: Lucy is my daughter too!
Avery: Enough, I’ve had enough drama for one day. I want my
last moments here in Genoa City to be peaceful. Besides I’m getting a headache.
Lily sure did a number on me.
Phyllis: Yea well that’s all the Winters women know how to
do is attack.
Daisy: Like Dru attacked you Phyllis. I saw the fight
between you two at the hospital the night Dru came back from the dead and returned
to Genoa City. Your film crew taped the whole thing as Dru beat you down. I bet
you were embarrassed the whole city saw Dru handing you your ass at the
hospital that night. You came to film the Verdon Lou story then you ended up
being the story.
Phyllis: I’d like to take this chair and beat you with it.
Daisy: That’s what you should have done to Dru, but anyway
Avery thank you for all you done for me. Getting me out of jail and all.
Phyllis: A tragic mistake.
Daisy: You take care of yourself.
Avery: You too Daisy thank you.
Daisy looks at Phyllis and waves good bye. Phyllis gives her
a contemptuous look and then raises her middle finger at Daisy. Daisy chuckles
and leaves.
Phyllis: The only thing I wanted to do was to see you off.
Avery: Well thank you Phyllis.
Phyllis leans over and gives her a hug.
The transporter arrives, ready to take Avery to Dallas,
Texas so she can attend drug rehab and the school for the blind.
Avery is assisted in the wheel chair and the transporter
pushes Avery out the room.
Phyllis: So long Avery.
Phyllis walks out the now empty room. She looks to her right
and left and on her left, she can see Lauren is visibly upset in an intense
conversation with Scotty.
“ Daniel was watching them too.” Phyllis wonders if she
should walk over there to find out what is going on."
Phyllis walks over to them and over hears Lauren saying
“ You will never have a child by a Carter!”
Lauren: Just watch me. Sheila will not win! Not through her
children or mine. She tried once before to take you away from me it didn’t work
then and it’s not going to work now!
Phyllis: Scotty got a Carter pregnant?
Lauren turns around and sees Phyllis. Her mood changes from
anger to apprehensiveness.
Lauren: Phyllis, I thought you were upset with me. You have
some secret you wanted to tell me but won’t because I had a date with Nick.
Phyllis: Yes the father of my child… My best friend had a
date with my ex-husband. I’m not supposed to be upset about something like
that? Besides back to you, which Carter did Scotty get pregnant? That Vandalynn
girl is Mary Carter isn’t she?
Scotty: Yes but we
didn’t know. I didn’t even know.
Phyllis: I feel for you. Daniel has a very hard time dealing
with her sister Daisy. In fact, Daisy is becoming more and more like her mother
by each passing day. I wonder if Daisy was in on this fake Vandalynn person
scam.
Lauren: I’m not going to have nor my son for that matter
will have the same issues you and Daniel have because I am not going to let
this happen!
Scotty opens Mary’s door but sees the room is empty having
been remade for a new patient.
Scotty: She’s not here.
Lauren: Ok so the only question now, Where is Mary Carter?










I kinda liked the sisterly interaction with Phyllis and Avery, though it's a shame they kept getting interrupted. Made for some good drama and some great back-and-forth between Phyllis and her enemies. I particularly liked how you wrote Victor here. Very cool, very collected, and very sharp.
ReplyDeleteLauren is in shock, and desperately grasping for a plan. I'm hoping they come up with something to outmaneuvre the Carters. They're starting all kinds of drama.
I realize now that Brock dying makes Mac the executor and wraps back around to Kay's will. That will be interesting to watch. I do hope Kitten and Garrett aren't too cartoonish, because I'm liking Karynn more when she's saucy but less campy, like she was in this episode. Kitten has the potential to be very alluring and saucy like her mother if she's allowed to tone down the humourous edges to her scenes sometimes. That will make her a delight!
Once again, I liked Karynn's salty repartee with Nina. I do hope Nina tries to fight back a bit, though. She kinda comes off a bit too meagre to mount a defense, and I know she's got a bit of bite to her as well!
A good episode. Nice focus, and I can't wait to see the Chicago crew come home.
The interactions made this episode...
ReplyDeletePHYLLIS/AVERY: You have a really good grasp on the character of Phyllis. I can see her saying everything she said to Victor, Lauren, and Daisy. Avery looks like she's being written out as she heads off to Dallas for rehab and a school for the blind.
CHICAGO: Now I see why Brock's death was announced at that time, because Mac becomes the executor of Katherine's will. ( I'm at the drs..More comments after lol)
Ok continuing...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed Phyllis's and Karynn's barbs to Victor (he's flat broke) and to Nina (about her weight). They lightened up the heaviness that came with Avery's blindness and Karl's death.
I also enjoyed Lauren and Phyllis's conversation...Although Phyllis is upset about Nick and Lauren's dinner (which Victor rubbed in nicely), they will need each other because Daisy is gonna get more and more dangerous.
ReplyDeleteGreat episode